In the sun outside
the supermarket,
a white feather
drifts

oblivious to the cares
of the world

4 thoughts on “Feather

    1. Thanks, John! I’m still undecided about exactly how to format it (line breaks/indents), but I’m glad I captured the moment and the idea.

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        1. Ahh, the format’s inseparable from the content in poetry. Changing where you break even a single line can change the whole meaning of a poem. 🙂

          Thanks for the encouragement!

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